en_tn/2ch/36/05.md

twenty-five years old ... eleven years

"25 years old ... 11 years" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers)

what was evil in the sight of Yahweh his God

Here "sight" represents judgment. Yahweh saw and did not approve of Jehoiakim's actions. AT: "what Yahweh judged to be evil" or "what Yahweh considered to be evil" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)