en_tn/dan/09/01.md

who had been made king over the realm of the Babylonians

AT: "who became king over the realm of the Babylonians" or "who conquered the Babylonians" (UDB). (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)

over the realm

"over the country" or "over the kingdom"

there would be seventy years until Jerusalem's abandonment would end

"from the time Jerusalem was destroyed, it would be abandoned for 70 years" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers)