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Henry Whitney 1 year ago
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act/15/12.md View File

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 "God had done" or "God had caused"
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-# a people for his name
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-"Name" here is a metonymy for "God's own purposes." AT: "a people for God's own purposes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
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 "should say the wrong thing I did that they were able to prove"
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-# It is about the resurrection of the dead
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-The abstract noun "resurrection" can be stated as "God brings back to life." The nominal adjective "dead" can be stated as "those who died." AT: "It is because I believe that God will bring back to life those who have died" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-nominaladj]])
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+The abstract noun "resurrection" can be stated as "God brings back to life." AT: "It is because I believe that God will bring back to life those who have died" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-nominaladj]])
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act/26/22.md View File

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 The phrase "the dead" refers to the spirits of people who have died. To rise from among them speaks of becoming alive again.
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-"to proclaim the message about the light." To tell people about how God saves people is spoken of as if a person were speaking about the light. AT: "to proclaim the message about how God saves people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
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+"he would proclaim the message about the light." To tell people about how God saves people is spoken of as if a person were speaking about the light. AT: "he would proclaim the message about how God saves people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
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 The word "living" is a nominal adjective that refers to people who are living. The phrase "those who are still alive" means the same thing as "the living." AT: "the people who are still alive" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-nominaladj]])
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 Paul speaks to the Gentile believers as if they had been foreigners, kept out of the land of God's covenant and promise. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
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 Here "draw out their swords" represents fighting with their swords. AT: "they will use their swords and fight against Egypt" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
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-This is an exaggeration to show that the Babylonians will kill very many Egyptians. There will be so many dead Egyptians that it will seem that their dead bodies cover all of the land of Egypt. AT: "they will kill so many people that it will seem like their dead bodies are everywhere" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hyperbole]]).
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+This is an exaggeration to show that the Babylonians will kill very many Egyptians. There will be so many dead Egyptians that it will seem that their dead bodies cover all of the land of Egypt. AT: "kill so many people that it will seem like dead bodies are everywhere" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hyperbole]]).
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 Here "named" means assigned or designated. This sentence can be stated in active form. AT: "that I will designate your descendants" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]]) (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
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 "Raise" here is an idiom for "caused to live again" AT: "God was able to cause Isaac to live again"  (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
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 The word "Jews" is a synecdoche for the leaders of the Jews who opposed Jesus. AT: "the Jewish leaders" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
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-"Leads the crowds astray" here is a metaphor, as if Jesus were leading the crowds in the wrong direction by deceiving them." AT: "He deceives the people." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]]).
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 The author uses these words to mark the beginning of a new event. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-newevent]])
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 "Raise" here is an idiom for "cause to live again" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
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 You may convert this to a modern measure. A "litra" is about one third of a kilogram. Or you may refer to a container that could hold that amount. AT: "a third of a kilogram of perfume" or "a bottle of perfume" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-bweight]])

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 Revealing things represents making them known. "Deep things from darkness" represent secrets that people do not know. AT: "He makes known secrets that people do not know" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
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+Bringing things out into the light represents making them known, and here "shadows" is a metonym for the things that are hidden in the shadows, which in turn are a metaphor for truths that God has hidden from people. AT: "makes known things that no one can see" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
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+"Raised up" here is an idiom for "established." AT: He has established" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
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+"Raised back to life" here is an idiom for "caused to live again." AT: "dead people are being caused to live again" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom]])
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-"walked along behind Joseph and the men who were with him; the women saw the tomb and how the men laid Jesus' body inside the tomb." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
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+This can be translated in active form. AT: "walked along behind Joseph and the men who were with him; the women saw the tomb and how the men laid Jesus' body inside the tomb." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
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 The word "temptation," an abstract noun, can be expressed as a verb. AT: "Do not let anything tempt us" or "Do not let anything cause us to desire to sin" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns]])
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